Thursday, September 22, 2011

Response to "Hype"

  In the article "Hype"by Kallen Lasn talks about how advertisement affects and intoxicates the human mind. The author has stated in this article that there has been 12 billion display of ads alone, 3 million radio commercials, and more than 200,000 thousand TV commercials. The author wrote this because advertisements effect the human mind and intoxicates them with all these advertisements. Advertisement intoxicates and pollutes the human brain.
  Advertisement intoxicates and pollutes the human brain. One reason is because for example if one person wants to be alone and away from people its hard for them to find something like that because people are going to be everywhere no matter were they go to. Its the same for advertisement many people don't want to go to work and see ads like it could drive someone crazy because is so many of them that a person can loose their minds.
  Another reason advertisement intoxicates and pollutes the human brain is because were ever you go ads is going to be there. Advertisements are made to get people to buy things their automatically suppose to be around so its basically impossible to try to run away from it. Advertisement in America is an epidemic to the human brain because it effects they way a person is thinking and the way people react to it. Advertisement can get people to act differently it could get people mad,sad,or even happy.
  In conclusion Advertisements intoxicates and pollutes the human brain. It effects the human brain because it could make them act differently and it would get into to your head one way or the other its impossible to run from it.

2 comments:

  1. Zachary, the summary includes details and leaves out ideas, which is the opposite of what you must do. The body paragraphs also need specific examples as evidence. This is not yet passing. You must disable word verification to receive any more comments

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  2. Thank you and oh alright but what do you mean by the opposite of what i must do?

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